Monday, September 14, 2015

If I Were A Athletics Track

If I Were a Athletics Track
If I were a Athletics track I would wait ages for a fit, strong athlete to come and train on me and accomplish their dreams.
If I were a Athletics track I would be super rough and tough, If anyone fell on me I would tell them to get back up and keep on going.
If I were a Athletics track I would cheer the runners on and when they pass the finish line I would scream with joy.
If I were a Athletics track Builders would have to make me look  and fabulous  sometimes have to change me



 

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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 2:25 PM

    I love your descriptive language in your writing :) Great Job!

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 2:31 PM

    Its really descriptive and got heaps of Adjectives >_<

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 2:31 PM

    Its really descriptive and got heaps of Adjectives >_<

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 2:33 PM

    It was very descriptive and had heaps of adjectives >_< YAY!

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 2:57 PM

      Why did you say the same thing 3 times William??

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    2. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 3:00 PM

      um i dont know how i did that

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    3. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2015 at 9:46 PM

      lol

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 2:33 PM

    I like your descriptive writing good job

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 2:38 PM

    i like how you made a image in my head it was really descriptive good job

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 2:58 PM

    I like how you created a picture in my mind about being rough & tough. Great poem!!

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